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When we shook the apple tree

chaos followed 🍎. Something is beginning.

By Novel AllenPublished about 15 hours ago • 4 min read

The gates of Eden have long been locked away from human eyes. Centuries have passed without incident. One day, without warning, a mighty storm gathered over the garden itself. A terrible wind blew the vines and limbs loose, exposing the gates to prying eyes. Myron and Mirah, out for a stroll and trying to seek shelter from the deluge, discovered the gate and pried it open. Time had rendered it loose and it easily fell open.

Was this just accidental. One might think this occurrence a stroke of luck - or was this moment one of celestial design?

The young couple had no idea what they were unleashing upon themselves and the world.

The garden, long asleep, yawned awake with a great rumble.

Mirah, alarmed - wanted desperately to flee...to run far away from this surreal place ...but Myron was far too intrigued to leave this novel garden.

Everywhere they looked, they saw colorful fruit trees, babbling brooks and unusual animals running free...was the garden beckoning them to partake of its offering. Mirah was instantly reminded of a long forbidden story of an apple tree. Myron just saw opportunity - for he wondered if anyone owned this long forgotten place. The riches he could acquire if he planned carefully.

In the very center of this marvel of a garden, stood a particularly inviting apple tree. It was laden down with the most succulent of fruits mortal eyes had ever seen.

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The light in-between the leaves twinkled on and off.

Was it silently inviting them to shake the tree and taste its magic.

Grasping Mirah's hand firmly - Together, they both approached the mystical tree. Then, letting go of his companion's hand - Myron shook the trunk - not expecting it to shudder so violently.

Apples came tumbling down. The leaves mourned woefully.

Mirah caught one in her hands, paused a moment, then - as if against her will...she raised it to her lips and took a succulent bite.

All the trees, animals, creeping and crawling creatures stood still...even the brook ceased its babbling.

Too late, Myron saw the serpent coiled in the tree's topmost branch.

It's lips curled back in an unpleasant, scornful - yet triumphant sneer as it happily dropped a scroll upon the earth. It had waited a long time for such a release.

Myron, only now becoming somewhat frightened... picked it up and read the words to a silent Mirah. She too, still holding the cursed apple...now realized the gravity of her actions.

The words on the scroll had also been waiting for them for a very long time...It read thus...

We have unwittingly shaken the apple tree

a small gesture one may say

but whether by accident or by design,

we tore open a hidden world.

Thus began a fable‑like compression -

a gravitation toward extraordinary action,

a propelling into cosmic consequence.

we expected fruits to sate our hunger

but all we got

were serpents which coiled around our souls

whispering unholy lies leading us astray

and so mankind discovered sin

and death followed closely after.

🍎

When we shook the apple tree, chaos followed.

it wasn't the loud kind - sounded by the thunder of war -

but a kind of soft, ancestral unravelling that begins

when something finally lets go.

Apples thudded into the moss like dropped moons.

The wind changed direction - became still as the world

held its breath.

Even the shadows hesitated,

as if waiting for instructions

from a story we hadn’t meant to summon.

🍎

When we shook the apple tree, chaos followed -

perhaps the tree remembered

what our ancestors had forgotten.

That the tree is not just a tree,

but an entity possessing a memory far older than ours,

and the “chaos” is not punishment but the return of something we once knew how to hold.

🍎 The Tree knew...

When we shook the apple tree, chaos would be sure to follow -

not because we disturbed its branches,

but because the tree remembered

what our ancestors died to preserve.

It remembered the old covenant:

that fruit was never meant to fall without a story,

that each apple carried within it, a small, sleeping world -

and that whomever awakened those worlds

had to be ready for what climbed out.

It remembered the first orchard,

where humans spoke to trees without words,

and trees answered by bending their limbs

toward whatever future we asked for or deserved.

It remembered the season...

when our lineage broke the pact -

when we took the fruit

but not the wisdom that ripened within it.

So when again we shook the apple tree,

it did not simply drop apples.

It dropped memories.

It dropped woe.

It dropped the unfinished bargains

our bloodline left hanging in the branches.

And the chaos that followed

was not destruction clinging to the vines

but recognition -

the sudden, overwhelming return

of everything we once promised

and everything the tree had waited

centuries to give back.

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Thus began humanity's second unravelling.

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About the Creator

Novel Allen

You can only become truly accomplished at something you love. (Maya Angelou). Genuine accomplishment is not about financial gain, but about dedicating oneself to activities that bring joy and fulfillment.

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  • Antoni De'Leonabout 13 hours ago

    This is one interesting premise for the wars and general bad behavior of leaders. Its the curse of the serpent in the tree. We need a good rebuking.

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