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Our bodies tremble
We cling to one another
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Paul Stewart
Award-Winning Writer, Poet, Scottish-Italian, Subversive.
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πΌI walked into the wrong room again, didn't I? The image choice was perfect. Where everything is white, I expect purity even when it is on a mattress on the floor. πΌThere are three stages in this piece, and the fullness of those stages played out in my mind, almost against my will! This was brilliant. Best of luck in the challenge! π€πΌ
I donβt understand what this is about. Fear of thunderstorms? Earthquakes? π
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**blushing** Nicely written.