they asked me right there and then
what am i really good at
(you don't wanna know i thought to myself on an undetectable wavelength i had stored away in my mind for an occasion such as this)
so i told them in no uncertain terms
(..this'll be good)
i told them
like they'd never
been told before
i like to whine
i like to moan
i like to grouse
i like to groan
i like to sook
i like to puss
i like to completely fuckin woos
i like to cry
i like to whinge
im a twat
i'm a minge
i can be your little witch
i can be your little snitch
i can be your little rat
i can be your little bitch
i could be a fucking fink
i could be a fuckin stoolie
i could be a witness for the other fucking team
i like to lie i like to steal
i will sour every single deal
make it
i’ll break it
take it
i’ll fake it
i live a lie
in my eye
maybe...
maybe...
this is oversharing
this
this husk
this shell
this life
this hell
About the Creator
Bren
“I know what I mean it to be and respect that someone else may read something entirely different.”
Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
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On-point and relevant
Writing reflected the title & theme
Eye opening
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Expert insights and opinions
Arguments were carefully researched and presented
Masterful proofreading
Zero grammar & spelling mistakes
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The story invoked strong personal emotions
Easy to read and follow
Well-structured & engaging content
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Comments (4)
Oh God, I too would feel like I'm oversharing! This was awesome!
What i wanna know is... who gave you less than an Outstanding for this? c n u t 😂
Very good. Hits hard.
Wow. Dr Seuss meets Sigmund Freud. Awesome my Australian friend… Next time…, a smidge fewer days up bush. I think it … affected you. 🤣😇🤣