Devouring (Nom Nom) Chocolate Eggs
Haiku of now
By Grz ColmPublished about 6 hours ago • Updated about 6 hours ago • 1 min read
Photo by Diana Polekhina on Unsplash
Devours choccie eggs,
A chocolate smorgasbord,
Stomach-ache ensues.
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Comments (5)
Such a great, whimsical haiku!
I love Cadbury eggs and was thrilled when I couldn't find them at my local store last week because I will eat too many and get a stomach ache.
chocolate, worth the ache. Hey Grz, what chu up to , apart from stuffing your face. Great to see you.
Not me reading choccie as coochie 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 But I loveeeeee chocolates hehehehehe. Awww, you have a tummy ache? That's for eating them without me 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Cute & Clever! I love it! Hyped 2 see you back! Get it G! 💪🏾🫶🏾💕