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Revenge Tastes Sweetest

When it's forbidden

By Cathy holmesPublished 2 years ago β€’ Updated 2 years ago β€’ 1 min read
Photo by Jennifer Pallian on Unsplash

He said "forgive me."

I kissed him. I baked a cake,

with his closest friend.

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Cathy holmes

Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.

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  • L.C. SchΓ€fer2 years ago

    Mmmm cake πŸ˜‹

  • ThatWriterWoman2 years ago

    Ooof! Nice twist! Especially in such tight word constraints!

  • Paul Stewart2 years ago

    LMAO! Love your humour...seems like he deserves it though. Great piece, Cathy Canada Buddy!

  • Rebecca Patton2 years ago

    Quite petty. I like it!

  • Did it get left out in the rain? Or just his got left out? (You could have used Ex-Lax.)

  • Love it! LOL! πŸ€£πŸ˜…πŸ€£

  • Great work

  • Dana Crandell2 years ago

    The sweet taste of revenge. Well done, Cathy!

  • It's not even his Birthday πŸ‘€πŸŽ‰πŸ˜†

  • Moe Radosevich2 years ago

    Hummmm, did ya put on some icing πŸ˜‚, good one Cathy 😊😊

  • Kristen Balyeat2 years ago

    Haha! He had it coming. Hope she serves him a slice! πŸ˜‚

  • JBaz2 years ago

    Baked a cake with his closest friend….lol

  • Mother Combs2 years ago

    Great Senryu

  • Lol, the way my eyes bulged 🀣🀣🀣🀣 I loved this!

  • Test2 years ago

    β€οΈβ€οΈπŸ’•

  • Donna Renee2 years ago

    Oooh revenge is sweet for sure! 🫣😁

  • Babs Iverson2 years ago

    OMG!!! Good one!!!β€οΈβ€οΈπŸ’•

  • Lamar Wiggins2 years ago

    Ooops! πŸ˜… I guess the relationship is open now! lol.

  • Mo Darasi2 years ago

    🀣🀣 he deserves it

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