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THiCKER THAN THiEVES

Hailed Swelling of the Brain

By jAKE RiCHARDSONPublished 25 days ago Updated 13 days ago 1 min read
Honorable Mention in The Unnecessary Line Challenge
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WE ARE WEATHER,

NOT HAND GRENADES,

WiTH AN ABRUPT FADE...

SUBTLE WADES THROUGH

AN OXYGEN-HYDROGEN HAZE.

AT LEAST TWO OF US ONE

JUMPiNG ON OR TOSSiNG OFF

OUR EXPLOSiVE HUMANiTY

FOR THE HOPE OF REAL...

FEELED iMPACT...iNTACT;

WHERE YES, iT WOULD BE

SO MUCH EASiER TO jUST...BLOW...

UP...UP...AND ASTRAY?

"THEY LOOK LiKE GOOD,

STRONG HANDS...DON'T THEY?"

ViRGiN WORDS FROM A

VETERAN MOUTH

FOR ViSiTORS FROM

MY HOMELAND.

REiGN COATS NEEDED

FOR THE RAiN, BUT ALSO

FOR THE THUNDERiNG LiMESTONE

TRAPPED UNDER OUR THUMBNAiLS.

GLASS FEATHERS

ON A WOODEN BiRD

HELD WiTH BOTH HANDS;

NOT AFRAiD OF THE SPLiNTERS

NOR THE FALLiNG OF DEAD LEAVES.

P.S. BUY MOM FLOWERS BEFORE THE END OF THE WEEK.

Free Verse

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jAKE RiCHARDSON

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout 16 hours ago

    Wooohooooo congratulations on your honourable mention! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • Gabriel Shames5 days ago

    Awesome! Love the imagery/ideas. Btw, what’s with lower case I’s?

  • Sandy Gillman25 days ago

    ‘We are weather, not hand grenades’ I love that line so much. Great work!

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