Critique

Stare at your flaws
(P.s it’s spoken word and steam of consciousness. My style) Stare at your flaws One wrong move, Western-type shots. You can move back, run backwards, HELL EVEN CRY. Don’t stop looking. This world has come with criminals that aren’t even criminals. Call me the reaper. Call this your final breath. But it might not be if you talk like you at court. Court of death you can say. So tell me, your flaws, your regrets, your grudges you still hold. Why? To know a real man, you must know what they are hiding. Why are you hiding?Real peace is when you cleanse your body. The flowers grow from withered to beautiful orchids. The trees go cold stubborn to dancing leaves. It blooms like birth. Somebody new is born...However you're torn if that new you is better. Simple answer: yes. However, your eyes cry out in confusion as it seems so complicated. To be honest, we love the fun work, not the hard work. Who doesn't? Bills have to be paid. Or in this sense: your heart deserves to be paid in peace. So tell me what’s your deepest fear, darkest flaw, why you hold so much. The hand shakes like he saw a murder scene, His eyes screamed in need of reflection. His heart was pumping; it sounded like a kid wanting candy. But he just needed a new life. He tried to speak/it seemed like somebody who had never talked before. Then, one by one,doors opened. One broken man because one choice broke his time frame. So he put pride on his wrist. Then life got twisted and twisted. His relationship problems,money problems, and problems with God. They were all falling down like a boulder-no Indiana Jones to catch it.The new problem was…how to solve a broken man. Three words/Hope and work. You can’t be the same all your life. You have to change and not be complacent. I lower the weapon. His eyes were relieved. The man said, ”Good, I dropped the gun-because looking at myself through the mirror/I need to let go and hope for better.”
By Messaiah Dejesus4 months ago in Art
Before the Word: A Meditation on Silence and the Poet's Notebook:
Before the Word: A Meditation on Silence and the Poet's Notebook The poet’s final product, the polished poem resting neatly on the page, is an object of structure, rhythm, and deliberate articulation. It presents an ending, a resolution, or at least a temporary stillness of thought. But the most vital, chaotic, and often-overlooked stage of composition occurs long before the first draft, in a strange, liminal space—the quiet, fertile dark known as “before the word.” This phase is not about writing; it is about receiving. It is a sustained meditation built on radical silence, acute observation, and the humble, immediate act of recording fragmented thoughts.
By DreamFold4 months ago in Art
Come Home
If I could plant my emotions into the earth and harvest our memories over and over again, I wonder if the grief would be so heavy
By Venesha Owen4 months ago in Art
Understanding the Need for QoS in Network Traffic Management
In today’s highly interconnected digital age, networks have become the lifeline for enterprise operations and daily communication. However, as applications such as video conferencing, real-time audio and video, and IoT data streaming place increasingly stringent demands on network latency, jitter, and packet loss rates, limited bandwidth resources often prove insufficient. Quality of Service (QoS) has emerged in this context — like an intelligent traffic control system, it can identify and prioritize the transmission quality of critical business traffic in complex network environments, thereby ensuring clear and uninterrupted voice communication, smooth and uninterrupted video streaming, and real-time, unlost control signals. Whether in enterprise communications or industrial IoT scenarios, QoS plays an irreplaceable role.
By ethernet-network4 months ago in Art
THE WALL COLOURS . Content Warning.
Back then, the walls were dead. Grey like old gum stuck under benches. Nobody cared what a building had to say. Then the hands came.
By JONNY TEN4 months ago in Art
HOLLOW KNIGHT
In Hollow Knight, every shadow hides a secret and every silence tells a story. Journey through the ancient tunnels of Hallownest, facing monstrous foes and uncovering the forgotten history of a world that once thrived beneath the surface.
By partialsynthesiz4 months ago in Art
The Youngest Son’s Silence | A Family Torn Between Duty and Dreams
Haroon: Why is it always like this? Just because I’m the youngest, my happiness doesn’t matter? Mother: Why do you think that way?
By Alexander Mind4 months ago in Art
The city of living Art
Hidden beyond the misty hills of Verona, there lies a place few dare to believe exists — Aurelion, the City of Living Art. It was said that every sculpture there could move, every painting could whisper, and every melody drifting through the air had a soul of its own. Travelers who found their way into Aurelion never forgot it; some stayed forever, enchanted by the life that pulsed through its marble veins.
By Abbas ali4 months ago in Art
What is the difference between a LAN port and a PoE port?
In network devices, we often see interface names like LAN Port and PoE Port. For non-professionals, they may look the same, but in fact, their functions and purposes are quite different.
By ethernet-network4 months ago in Art
The Ethereal Empress: Florence Welch's Journey From Bohemian Dreamer to Indie Rock Royalty Part 2 . AI-Generated.
The Ethereal Empress: Florence Welch's Journey From Bohemian Dreamer to Indie Rock Royalty Part 2 Buckle: The Loneliness Embedded in Fame
By Nivard Anna4 months ago in Art
Rene Magritte
René Magritte was a famous Belgian surrealist artist. One of his most famous works is The Son of Man. I first saw Rene Magritte’s works in another version of Ozzy’s Mama I’m coming home, where the video was filmed within all his iconic works.
By Revista XCI by Rikki La Rouge 4 months ago in Art
The Scream
Edvard Munch’s scream is another of my favorite paintings next to Nighthawks’. I have a T-shirt with The Scream 😱 by Edvard Munch. This painting is absolutely bright and incredible. It is a contradiction in a sense of warm colors, but a dark and deep theme. The Scream is the inner anxiety and torment of modern life and is as relevant today as the way Nighthawks are. In the Scream The dark figures represent anxiety and all the things we try to escape from and that is what the person who screams is a precise representation. The Scream is a masterpiece!
By Revista XCI by Rikki La Rouge 4 months ago in Art