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Foul Deeds

Moment of Silence Acrostic Poem

By Cindy CalderPublished 2 years ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read

Silent stench of carcass

In the garden, midst dead weeds

Lingers, bares our most foul deeds

Embracing man’s succumbing ways

Nourishing his path to mortal fray

Calculating impending hell in

Elements of evil’s spell

sad poetry

About the Creator

Cindy Calder

From Charleston SC - "I am still learning." Michelangelo

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  • Sarah Danaherabout a year ago

    Well done, a great entry for the challenge.

  • Grz Colmabout a year ago

    Yoikes! Great rhythm, Cindy. I enjoyed the rhyming ones like yours! 😃 👏

  • Anna 2 years ago

    This was so dark, I loved it!

  • D.K. Shepard2 years ago

    Oooh! Dark and eerie! Very well done, Cindy!

  • L.C. Schäfer2 years ago

    Great, I have AC/DC in my head now 😄 Brilliant poem, I could feel that cloying stench (what a great word) on my skin and nostrils!

  • Pamela Williams2 years ago

    Interesting, Cindy. Still thinking about it.

  • This was so dark and poignant. I absolutely loved it!

  • Mark Graham2 years ago

    Interesting in a weird way. Good work in a way.

  • Kenneth cruz2 years ago

    Fun

  • FAITH ROCK2 years ago

    Nice article

  • Hope Martin2 years ago

    Ah, bone chills! Silent as a graveyard... is what this makes me think of. Good job spooky friend!

  • 𝐑𝐌𝐒2 years ago

    Oh snap! I fear that is not just a dead rodent in the garden! I love your word choices, Cindy! "Nourishing his path to mortal fray." Wow, nice.

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    Oooh that's a good one.

  • Test2 years ago

    Incredible work.

  • Rachel Deeming2 years ago

    Blimey. This was menacing!

  • Test2 years ago

    The pain of destruction equips with knowledge.

  • Whoa, a different presentation of the place we don't want to be. The silence and desolation are poignant.

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