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How We Lost the Time

And perhaps a way to find it

By The Dani WriterPublished 10 days ago 1 min read
Top Story - February 2026

Impermanent ones did this

Made time a construct

then a commodity

Enshrined it in copyright

Carved district zones

Grades and delineations for trade

Commerce

Management purposes

Implied coercion long enough

translated to

Any exercise of inherent freedoms

warrants permission

Application pending approval

Motion became currency denominations we had to buy

alongside barcodes we had to glorify

in worship at productivity’s altar

Though Earth fashioned our bones

it was Spirit who seeded us

as gifts from the Everlasting and Ever True

Our return a law unbreakable

Thus contentment followed comfort

wrapped in new flesh

And in this innocence

they saw opportunity

Salivated over potential earnings

paid subscriptions and contracts in perpetuity

under legislation of such oppressive thickness

we could not breathe it

but somehow

adapted to survive

and in so doing

birthright fell from memory

We continued to clock in

for work

family

friends

nonprofits

but never ourselves

Conditioning complete

Conclusive

Foreign body inhalation

and aversion to any belief

that time

was ever free

***

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The Dani Writer

Explores words to create worlds with poetry, nonfiction, and fiction. Writes content that permeates then revises and edits the heck out of it. Interests: Freelance, consultations, networking, rulebook-ripping. UK-based

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  • sleepy drafts2 days ago

    Wow, Dani - this blew my mind. Powerful and beautifully written.

  • 🔺️🧸♤🟡🔸️ BLESSINGS ◾️🟣🔻🟩🔲💠❤¹² Thank you

  • Very deep. Congratulations on Top Story!

  • Kera Hollow9 days ago

    I wish Vocal had a highlight feature so I could mark all the lines that I loved. This was brilliant and honestly anxiety-inducing!

  • So raw and honest.

  • I can relate to you pain in this masterpiece

  • Roderick Makim10 days ago

    this is excellent

  • This hits the spot

  • Sam Spinelli10 days ago

    Painfully accurate, sad truths. I do feel conditioned. But still, this was worth reading, and worth saying. I’m glad you wrote this and I’m glad you got some recognition for it. Wish deprogramming were easier.

  • So much truth in this and it was so profound. Congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • Amazing and Beautiful 😍 Congratulations on your Top Story🎊

  • Paul Stewart10 days ago

    Powerful and potent words Dani. Beautiful work and perfect entry. Congrats on Top Story

  • COOL BLESSINGS

  • Novel Allen10 days ago

    Hi Dani. This challenge challenges us to look inside ourselves and the system of our lives. Such true words here...reflection runs rampant.

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